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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-08-13 10:37 AM


Towering songs take flight
Happily through the fingers of thought
Whispering in my ear
Invisible nature, takes my hand
Coupling joyful dance
Weaving threads of air
Sounds unfurling, remarkable
I prance with therapy
Smelling moist breath of octaves
Zillions of keys posture music
Flute of the woodland
Weaving the silence of noontide
I am substance


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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-08-13 11:17 AM


Tangerine Dream or Vangelis...?

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2 posted 2003-08-13 11:19 AM


Lee, this is great writing!!
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Ethel

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LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-08-13 11:35 AM


Many Thanks to both of you...for reading and commenting...I greatly appreciate your time and kindness...

Mark....I don't understand what your asking?

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2003-08-13 11:44 AM


LeeJ:  Tangerine Dream is an electronic music group that has been around since the late 60's, having scored many films such as RISKY BUSINESS and LEGEND and is probably the forefather to most contemporary electronic music out there, and Vangelis is a brilliant "electronic" composer (famous for his scores for CHARIOTS OF FIRE, BLADERUNNER, and THE YEAR OF LIVING DANGEROUSLY).  My impression from your poem was a "tribute" to some form of electronic music;  thus my question if it happened to have been to either of these artists...  In any case, if you enjoy electronic music, I would highly encourage you to listen to some offerings from these two artists...

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LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-08-13 12:44 PM


Hi Mark, thank you for the insight...no, not a tribute to those musicians...just something from my muse, I suppose....anyway, thank you for the suggestions...will definately look into....
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6 posted 2003-08-13 02:04 PM


nice read n write,,,

     


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