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Rick
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0 posted 2003-08-13 09:43 AM



If my body leaves this place of life to rest within the ground
Please do not cry the sorrowed tears, for I am still around

I’m with you and still happy, finding peace where others go
And always grateful of the time that I had chance to know

I sleep among the flowers now to wake with every morn
I sleep with buds of beauty now that waken with the dawn

I ride upon the sunshine and I dance among the trees
I share with bees their honey and the singing of the breeze

My spirit is immortal and the essence of my heart
My body, time's forsaken, but my love will never part

I’m with you as you ponder and I hold you with my love
I share with you my heaven and the peace I found above

I’m there when you’re remembering the times we both did share
I’m where all spirits journey now and travel everywhere

I’m the thought that breaks your sadness,
the light that you can see
Mere death was not my ending; it was where life set me free


Lest not forget those gone


© Copyright 2003 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Patricia
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1 posted 2003-08-13 09:51 AM


Rick...how wonderful this verse...Goodness, I kept feeling my eyes opening wider with each line.  Just awesome!

Patricia

Rick
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2 posted 2003-08-13 09:55 AM


Dear Patricia, thank you so much for this reply my friend, it means so much to me. Take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-08-13 10:42 AM


I’m the thought that breaks your sadness,
the light that you can see
Mere death was not my ending; it was where life set me free

this was a song which captures the heart
Rick...faith is alive in this...your an incredible soul....thank you for sharing

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-08-13 11:06 AM


Very nice....James
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5 posted 2003-08-13 11:25 AM


This is really beautiful Rick, and I am putting into my library to read again and again. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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6 posted 2003-08-13 11:56 AM


I’m with you as you ponder and I hold you with my love
I share with you my heaven and the peace I found above

I’m there when you’re remembering the times we both did share
I’m where all spirits journey now and travel everywhere


Rick, this is absolutely beautiful.
Thank you
for sharing this, my friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel


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7 posted 2003-08-13 12:35 PM


Rick, I don't have long replies, not good at spewing words out, but this one touches me, and I needed this today

thank you, friend

Rick
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8 posted 2003-08-14 06:40 AM


LeeJ, you are an angel, thank you so much for this reply, friends and memories support our faith and keep us from loneliness, again thank you.

James, thank you for your reply, very much appreciated.

Chris, that was a lovely reply, thank you.

Dear Ethel, great to see you here, thanks for the reply as always very much appreciated.

Dear Dixie, all your words touch a spot in me, I am glad to be able to return the pleasure, thank you for the reply my friend.

To you all, again, thank you, take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

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9 posted 2003-08-14 10:56 AM


Rick~
I found your thoughts comforting~

'I’m the thought that breaks your sadness,
the light that you can see
Mere death was not my ending; it was where life set me free'


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


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10 posted 2003-08-14 11:56 AM


Rick, you do not post as often as I would like you to; however, when you do write a poem, it is well worth the wait.

This is a


Linda

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11 posted 2003-08-14 12:24 PM


It's poets such as yourself that make reading an absolute joy. I feel priviledged for having read your enormously soulful verses. Thank you for sharing.

I have only my genius to declare!

Rick
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12 posted 2003-08-15 08:03 AM


Dear Marge, thank you for your reply, it was much appreciated.

Dear Linda, sorry I don't post more often, my heart speaks to the pen only so often, but life too takes the free moments, lovely to see your reply here, thank you.

MoniDaPoet, such a wonderful reponse you have given me here, for that I thank you very much my friend, I look forward to reading some of your works in the future.

Take care my friends, may your hearts keep speaking and dancing with your pens.

Sincerely
Rick

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