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minoune
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since 2003-08-10
Posts 87
Canada

0 posted 2003-08-13 08:29 AM



Please listen carefully,
I had a plea
I was tired of being used,
i wanted just you and me
All the years of unfaithfulness,
on both sides agreed,
i went against my will for you
i must have lost my mind indeed
But in doing this i hurt myself,
i never wanted to go that way
I did this because of you
and now regret it every day
It took away a part of me
that i am trying to get back
so every day, little by little,
its easier to keep track
of what i really want, and its not hard to say
I wanted to be loved by you, in every way,
Not shared, not held, not loved by another,
The vows i made, were for forever after
I can't believe you asked me to stray
Thank god i had the strength, to leave you
anyway...
Loving you was easy... but it wasn't enough
You asked me to be strong, to be tough
and endure the frolics you so desperately wanted..
and felt like i was seriously daunted...
Like an actress in a play, i did the part..
But after it was done... i fell apart
In a million pieces, which was why i couldn't stay
In a marriage of lies and deceit
You wanted no other way
If this be a lession to people that dream
Listen to me, i lived it... look deep
Because with this comes hate, dishonour and blame
and the worst of all, is the feelings of shame
Let yourself be loved by one who wants just you
and cherish him to death, until forever you are two...

minoune...

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-08-13 10:22 AM


shame...yes, I have lived there.

Enjoyed this.

Susan

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
2 posted 2003-08-13 11:09 AM


Heavy but poignant...  As long as resolution was found...  Seems that such limbo could tear apart most anyone.  Thanks for sharing.

-MVS

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