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Greater Things Decide Our Lifes
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Greater Things Decide Our Lifes |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Moonlight, slipped through darkness Cast to a lake Near forests of old bury dreams Forgotten pasts And futures yet to be seen Keeled in the dirt There all alone Hands and knees Struck with a coldness The water Flowed far and wide To places unheard of And unseen By the naked eye Grasping a stone Held in a palm Throw to watery surface Skipped along joyfully Not knowing Doomed to drown As it sent out its ripples Of its last cry of pain Totally lost Forgotten to this world Only remembered By the one that looked on A tear cried Rolling to this lake Where gathered tears Travel to a place Turning the tears Into new born life Not wasting a drop Nor the sadness held inside Stood to the raising sun Warmth engulfed this soul Bringing peace To this once depressed being A new day began This gift from above Not time to leave this place To see the heavens above A question still remains In this now forgiven mind When will it end What be the time Once held a death Of a stone in there hands Will it be the same When they leave this land Cast away for fun By a greater stronger being Killed by the god He obeys everyday Maybe if no sin is done He’ll survive Forever immortally Saved for the loyal ones |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Interesting contemplation and a unique analogy. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Moonlight, slipped through darkness Cast to a lake Near forests of old bury dreams Forgotten pasts And futures yet to be seen" ~ A beautiful opening stanza that pulls the reader right in. Many marvellously descriptive passages. Your ponderings show that you are not just a "pretty face"!   EA |
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