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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-13 08:20 AM




You make me weak, in all the things you say.
I know that I can't love you,
But I'm tryin anyway.
I turn, not to listen,
Because your words make so much sense.
And I return to a day,
When what I said was what I meant.
But I can't love you now.
No matter what you say.
And I can't love you now,
Even though I wanted it that way.
You whisper to me quietly,
That everything's okay.
But I can't love you now.
no matter what you say.


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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-08-13 10:58 AM


Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-08-14 03:59 AM


this hit home
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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3 posted 2003-08-14 05:32 AM


Very nice and delicate writing...thank you...
Goldenrose.

Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2004-07-05 02:50 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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