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I Can't Love you

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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You make me weak, in all the things you say.
I know that I can't love you,
But I'm tryin anyway.
I turn, not to listen,
Because your words make so much sense.
And I return to a day,
When what I said was what I meant.
But I can't love you now.
No matter what you say.
And I can't love you now,
Even though I wanted it that way.
You whisper to me quietly,
That everything's okay.
But I can't love you now.
no matter what you say.

© Copyright 2003 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 08-13-2003 10:58 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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this hit home
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Very nice and delicate writing...thank you...
Goldenrose.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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