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Third Libra
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since 2003-08-10
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South Carolina

0 posted 2003-08-13 08:06 AM


As we kiss
You’re dying.
I can feel it from your lips
Your breathe lies on a whisper.

So we both die,
Into each others lies.
So slowly we subside,
Into the reaper’s cries.

I’m in love with you
And your tears.
I love your despair,
And you’re fears.

So we both die,
Into each others lies.
So slowly we subside,
Into the reaper’s cries.

Die, die, die in you’re love.
Die, die, die, my longing.
Die so slowly.
Die my darling.

So we both die…
So we both die…
So we both die…
Slowly into the reaper’s cries.


Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

© Copyright 2003 Michael Moore - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-09-15 01:07 AM


very heart felt write,,,

                               

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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2 posted 2003-09-15 06:47 PM


Okay, little scared over here...

Maybe we are dying in love?  

Okay, I feel better...lol

Good job.

Susan

Third Libra
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since 2003-08-10
Posts 125
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3 posted 2003-09-17 06:45 AM


Thank you both for readin and commenting.
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