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minoune
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since 2003-08-10
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0 posted 2003-08-13 07:52 AM



Standing on a hilltop, or on golden shore,
watching the waves come rolling in.. following them, come more....
The sky at dusk is wondrous,
The waters very still,
As you listen closely... a message is at your will
My whispers carry sentiments from afar,
They hold my thoughts, my dreams of you,
as you look to the stars
Never wonder where i am for i am here with you,
distance means nothing.... when love is new...
As you look up, close your eyes, feel me touching you,
my ready lips grazing your cheeks,
oh god how i need you
And if you concentrate really hard,
on the whispers in the wind,
They'll carry back a message to me,
uniting us again...


minoune

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Darklight
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since 2003-08-04
Posts 12
Sweden
1 posted 2003-08-13 09:02 AM


yes, new love is like this
thank you!

love,

Darklight

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2003-08-13 11:25 AM


minoune - whispers fly on the wind and distance means nothing, as you have written well...

BC

minoune
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since 2003-08-10
Posts 87
Canada
3 posted 2003-08-19 07:16 AM


Thankyou Bill...

minoune

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