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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-08-13 01:47 AM

upon the foremost pitter patter
I asked the poem "What's the matter?"
by "he" or "she" or "it" to tell
of tender feet whose arches fell

I asked the poem "why so long?
because the meter’s measured wrong?”
before I asked the poem more
a rhythmic rap came on the door

in came floating silver eye
ruby lips were followed by
a chest of moon an eye bonanza
a cause to write another stanza

antiquity approached this poem
I only ended so forth knowing
that feeling may not coincide
with meaning giveth suicide

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (08-13-2003 01:13 PM).]

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-08-13 02:32 AM

Hello there, I have missed you and your wit,
and all the poetry that comes with it.

You be with it Walter!!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-08-13 02:36 AM

walt, where ya been? missed ya!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2003-08-13 03:18 AM

Hey Waltyyyyyy I've missed ya! where ya bin dude?

Missed reading your poetry too.
keeping this, because I lerrv it.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-08-13 09:51 AM

Ah, wow... I always know I'm in for a ride when I open your poetry... and I can't wait to hop on! *S*

I liked this very much... good to see you posting! *S*

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

5 posted 2003-08-13 10:55 AM

Is this poem chemicaly enhanced or do you use natural herbs?Just kidding.Happy to see you posting again.Yuh!

paladin

....a knight without armor

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-08-13 11:01 AM

Woo, very nice.... You have wit and wits, and you know when to use 'em both -- allatime!

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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-08-13 11:09 AM

ok...i've read this several times
and I'M becoming "chemically enhanced"!
seriously...i love it - even if the
meaning keeps shifting on me...woah!
(looking forward to your next post)

Rf

[This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (08-13-2003 11:10 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-08-13 11:49 AM

Walt~
I would return the compliment to you two-fold -
'your poems are always worth the read'~

It is VERY good to see a penning from you~
Come back more often my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-08-13 11:52 AM

Hi Walt me friend !!

How's it goin'? Missed your stuff. Good to read you again. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

10 posted 2003-08-13 11:54 AM

i wanted to thank ya'll all. Its been very hard for me to get in the mood to write.. summer blahs I guess. I like the comment on how the poem's meaning shifts hehe.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-08-13 12:02 PM

Hey, walt. I don't see much of you here, but
I do like your writes when I do see you. I especially
liked this ending of this one.....

in came floating silver eye
ruby lips were followed by
a chest of moon an eye bonanza
a cause to write another stanza

antiquity approached this poem
I only ended so forth knowing
that feeling may not coincide
with meaning giveth suicide

Very good, with a touch of humor.

Hugs

Ethel

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

12 posted 2003-08-13 04:39 PM

This is clever. Glad I married a man with wit!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2003-08-13 05:19 PM

I just had to come back and have another read....need more from you Walty

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

14 posted 2003-08-14 02:43 PM

this is very original. i like it a lot. btw happy anniversary to you and yours.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

15 posted 2003-08-14 07:07 PM

It's wonderful to read you again Walt. Still a light whimsical touch that shouldn't fool the reader--you always have the depth there, m'friend.

now gimme a hug?

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

16 posted 2003-08-14 09:36 PM

hehehehe thanks to ya'll

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