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The Rain |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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the rain hits my faces like little drops of blood from a freshly made cut i breath in the sweet smell i am cleansed i am free the rain washes away all the anger all the sorrow all thats left is me open revealed naked..... "when everything feels like the movies, |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
well expressed,,, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
before I tell you how much I l#ve this, I must notify you of something scary and insane. I used to have that same exact signature that you are using right now. same song, same phrase..and then we were ranting about how good coldplay was..that was right after I changed it. so..yeah. I'm scared now. and really great poem Chelsea. insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (09-06-2003 09:38 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You've spoken truth here, a clear vision of how it is. .....but for actual rain, I'll take the rare but warm showers here in Southern California over any deluge up there in the Frozen North.....! Yeowie! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"the rain washes away all the anger all the sorrow all thats left is me open revealed naked....." If that is so, I wish it would hurry up and start raining here! Enjoyed.. ~K~ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love poems about the rain. This one is really good, too.  Hugs  Ethel |
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