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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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0 posted 2003-08-12 11:17 PM


The tide beats against the sand
my eyes all red and puffy from crying..i watch
the ocean always made me feel better as a kid
its not helping my now
i feel empty inside
like a peice of me was ripped out
or maybe it was never there to begin with
the sun is setting
i've been wating for this all day
the sunset
maybe it will shine some of its rays into my heart
because when you left me
you took all my sun
you were the one that kept me sane
you helped me through the worst times in my life
i guess i'll never get over you
but if this is the way it has to be
i'll remember you always
my one
my only
true love....

"when everything feels like the movies,
you bleed just to know your alive."
-goo goo dolls


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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-08-12 11:42 PM


"my eyes all red and puffy from crying..i watch
the ocean always made me feel better as a kid
its not helping my now
i feel empty inside
like a peice of me was ripped out
or maybe it was never there to begin with"

Yes, yes...

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