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Open Poetry #28

The creature

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2003-08-12 07:54 PM

Deep within the darkest del
A creature lies beneath the world
Warm inside his created crease
His breath begins to slowly cease
The monster feared by most intreiged
Lies waiting to be thrice released
To feed upon our body whole
Entice us into his caven hole
Breath of fire awaiting torch
Our souls he wants eternal scorch

[This message has been edited by whiskey (08-12-2003 08:01 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-12 08:38 PM

nice write about the diablo,,

nice to see/ya" back,,,

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2003-08-13 01:44 AM

It has been some time since I have had a taste of you .....

               ... still burns,
                      I feel you.

        Yes, welcome back!!

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2003-08-13 01:55 AM

pretty sweet .... nice to see you

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