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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-12 01:40 PM

Raven’s Song

in the
matter of
my need
I am not
crazy
yet, could be
fashionably insane
with feeble words
caught on pages
where a flight
of wings
from pen
land
flocking illusions
of scattered
thoughts from
a heart
waiting in
tender sorrow
pine breath
falls from
tree tops
ebony glossed
as the raven
cries shrill
into the night
finding broken
echoes in
coal blackness
another night
flight ended
fettered by
heavy heart

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2003-08-12 01:49 PM

The Raven can warn you of danger, even danger from your self.

Strong images well written. Thank you for sharing.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-12 08:38 PM

How the @&$*$(#*(@ does this have only one reply..i give up

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-13 12:30 PM

Helen, I'm sending it back for another round. Okay, Raph? Sorry, but some of them get pushed down really fast. Who's know why, unless it's the enormous amount ofm posting.
It can get disheartening, sometimes, I know. Some of mine in here have only 2 replies, but I knoiw that it's because of the time that I post them.

Just know, Helen, that I love your poetry.

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-08-13 12:49 PM

you go Raph!

Helen, you know I love your stuff, and can always relate...sorry I missed this one

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

5 posted 2003-08-13 01:03 PM

-sigh-

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-08-13 01:14 PM

OneSlick~

This is elegant !

AND WITH THIS -

'fashionably insane'

- you have given me the PERFECT LABEL TO WEAR ~

I love it !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-08-13 02:51 PM

Fashionably insane doesn't look half bad,
if you can pull it off!!

Nice Helen~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2003-08-13 04:08 PM

Wow..
My favorite part..
ALL OF IT.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2003-08-14 02:37 AM

Fashionably insane is the only way to live, and combined with your signature Helen, gives me an idea it is time for a change? Strong writing on a very intense subject.

ShadowRaven
Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 51

10 posted 2003-08-14 02:56 AM

Brilliant! Bloody brilliant!

I love it! (but then again - of course I would! tehehe)

Raven

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2003-08-14 06:22 AM

Sheer beauty.....this WILL reside in my library.....

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-08-15 06:50 PM

Helen . . .
I havent been in lately but fell upon this beauty . . .

feeble words
caught on pages
where a flight
of wings
from pen
land
flocking illusions
of scattered
thoughts from
a heart

It melted right off of the screen onto my desk . . .
xxoo

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