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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-12 12:40 PM



Clear

another night
I realize
I fall asleep
knowing
I lost
maybe tomorrow
will come
with something
I understand

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2003-08-12 12:43 PM


You have such a way with words. You can take the most simple thoughts and turn them into a sculpture of passion, or in this case, sorrow. Nicely done, yet again.

If you're not yourself, then there is no you.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-08-12 01:00 PM


keep the positive attitude

another bittersweet write H

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-08-12 08:39 PM


yes a new day..not being able i've been living the same one for awhile now and it blows like the others did
Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-08-13 09:42 PM


bump
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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-08-13 09:52 PM


Wow Helen ! Wow.   hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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