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0 posted 2003-08-12 12:13 PM



EverBend

In radiant dance,
her spinning of a rainbow
down to buckets of gold
doesn’t surprise me

I swear, she talks
to leaves
just to hear them giggle
in childlike wonder

as flowers unfurl
just to see if she is following
their evolution

she is eagerness of small fingers
in stare of them to curl
around her own

she is a bear hug in hold
of silvery filaments and other affairs

a motion of poet is in her step
and her smile

she is the cradle at the foot of the mountain,
a hammock of life
that swings song into mystery

one cascades deep into dark eyes
hearing her mouth the sound of
friend

and knowing it is you
she speaks to…

but for all of this
and more
I cherish her, because I know
she values me

she is poet, she is friend
she is Martie in ever-bend…

    


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-12-2003 04:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-12 12:17 PM


A beautiful tribute to a very special poet and friend.
Absolutely wonderful Karilea...
Martie will be so thrilled!
~Hugs & I'm out the door~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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2 posted 2003-08-12 04:51 PM


Oh my Karilea....this is a stunning and an absolutely beautiful tribute for our beautiful Martie.

She's going to love it.

Well done Sunshinygirl

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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3 posted 2003-08-12 05:08 PM


Absolutely lovely tribute to a poet friend.  So beautiful, K!

Patricia

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4 posted 2003-08-12 05:10 PM


You have captured Martie's beauty of soul very well dear Karilea......yes indeed. hugs for this, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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5 posted 2003-08-12 05:10 PM


"I swear, she talks
to leaves
just to hear them giggle
in childlike wonder

as flowers unfurl
just to see if she is following
their evolution"

Wow, this write is one of your best!
I'm saving this

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6 posted 2003-08-12 05:10 PM


nothing more fragrant than a touching tribute to a friend...beautiful!

Rf  

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7 posted 2003-08-12 05:13 PM


A beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady.
angelblueyes

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Thanks, everyone...this one evolved on its own while I was thinking on how Martie writes...and believe me, she's sort of like Bob Hope - one of a kind and never imitated!

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9 posted 2003-08-13 12:38 PM


very nicely done..and a fitting tribute to a very fine poet...
hats of to both of you..(chuckling) you for writing this..and Martie..well for being Martie...


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10 posted 2003-08-13 12:55 PM


a perfect tribute
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11 posted 2003-08-14 04:29 PM


A beautiful poem for a beautiful lady....you captured an angel here, showed her as she is, and that is poetry enough.

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12 posted 2003-08-14 05:12 PM


Karilea,

You are a wonderful person!  And you can write to!!

Love you lady!

Susan

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13 posted 2003-08-14 05:20 PM


This is simply stunning, Sunshine... a beautiful tribute to a lovely lady. *S*
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14 posted 2003-08-14 05:42 PM


Yes, a very beautiful tribute to a very
special poetess.....

Nicely done KJ..

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15 posted 2003-08-14 08:21 PM


nicely penned write,,

     


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16 posted 2003-08-14 11:55 PM


Karilea

This is so very beautiful...and makes me feel very blessed to have a friend like you...thank you.  My computer has had that nasty worm, so I didn't see this until now.  

You are wonderful, you know!  

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17 posted 2003-08-16 11:35 AM


Ah, you're welcome, Martie...you don't know how much fun I had watching my hand write this...
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