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Marge Tindal
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In This Hour ....
~*Marge Tindal*~

In this hour of discontent
I cry the tears, Heaven-sent
Feeling each moistured drop-in-flow
as down this cheek of sorrow they go~

Nothing ever remains the same
with sweeping hands of tormented time
Touching dark ... of too soon embark
in this pen of rhyme~

I come slowly bending
on knee in reverent tending
asking for blessing of nothing but time
more ... more ...
please, dear mercy, I would implore~



*'Peel Of Reveal' ... a series in progress*

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Beautiful plea of mercy to the hands that grasp us all. The hands of time.
Wonderfully done Marge!

The only one that can hold you back is yourself.

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That hour has come to visit me many times.
Hope all is well with you...

Hugs,
Deb
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Heartfelt and beautifully expressed
hope
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This is beautiful
Betty
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Oh Marge...such a heartfelt plea!  You brought tears to my eyes, Poetess.  
Keep the words flowing, my friend.  You have so much yet to say.

Hugs to you,
Patricia
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Heaven sent tears..

wow..

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beautiful
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your poems are always worth the read Marge.
Marge Tindal
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Negligent in having thanked each of you for your replies~
The anguish of some sleepless nights find me seeking ... just seeking~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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