very nicely done.. and your pain is felt here.. just remember that with time, you'll heal, i know its hard to see now, but it will. Time heals all wounds, if you let it.. but you have to let go... Remember, *if you love something, set it free, if it comes back, its yours, if it doesn't.. it never was*... Just find smiles dear one..
I can totally relate, this was an awesome poem, just keep writing it's always a door to your soul, sometimes when we find out who we really are and step out on our own, it at least helps, that's what I'm doing anyway. take care don't forget someone here listens.
on the threshold of a dream