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Green eyed monster

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


0 posted 08-12-2003 09:02 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

this is a re-post of jelousy, i just started poting yeasterday and didnt know your only spose to posts three at a time sorry!


The green-eyed monster reared its ugly head.
I wish I could take back the angry words I've said.
Tears on my pillow as I lie in bed.
Thinking to myself, in my head.
When I saw you with that girl we both knew,
The green-eyed monster inside of me grew.
I didn't know what else to do.
So out of my mouth the words just flew.
My suspicions were wrong, I now can see
That I mean more to you than she.
Will you please accept my apology?
Do you think you could ever forgive me?
As I think back on our romance,
Will you please give us just one more chance?
© Copyright 2003 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
minoune
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since 08-10-2003
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1 posted 08-12-2003 09:19 AM       View Profile for minoune   Email minoune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for minoune

good wording my dear...could feel your pain...
Just try to remember to smile.. it will help you heal.

minoune
LeeJ
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since 06-19-2003
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2 posted 08-12-2003 09:23 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

angry words, jealousy and deceipt can kill any relationship, and it very difficult to recapture...although this person can forgive you...they may not wish to trust you again.
Good luck....
lilythumbs
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3 posted 08-12-2003 10:31 AM       View Profile for lilythumbs   Email lilythumbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilythumbs

i enjoyed this poem very much, thank - you
Tequilia_Sunrise
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4 posted 07-05-2004 02:53 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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