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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-08-12 08:10 AM


sap filled voice mantras from the eventide isles
cleaving to the abyss of my soul
impulses awakening coils of hasty strolls
panting powers, inspiring disobedient dreams
oh sweet spirit, impetuous one, feel the maneuvering melody
uncontrollable forests tremble with eagerness
collecting magnificent vapors, launching foam-like stone’s caress
bubbling, encircling, harps of wind to life yet unknown
announcing conscious furnishings, from past to present tones
free-thinking reformists, stimulating uniting passion
oh, spark of life, dramatic informant, reflecting perception’s companion
driving the world, mirrors from gigantic shadows of aim
casting expression, across time, imposing creative schemes
melody of the wind, accommodates proportional heroic elation
within the mind’s eye, comes this voice of growing meditation
transitory brightness arises within, constantly changing and develops
sequence of patterns and proportional singing motifs
channels as it receives, a language of flowing decree
observations impose these metaphorical tones
remarkable minds, relating to the elements now overflows
mad scenes of courage, flowing passionate belief
interwoven images, oozing from the flight of complexity
a brilliant leaf, a happy cloud and crescendo’s sway in the night
into the depths of oceans fusing sea flora’s enchanting lights
oh comrade, my enchanter, you incarnate each and every verse
driving power and voice of true spring which elate and merge
ode to creative oceans bringing azure fires on the wing
from bright hair of horizon, we reach our hail of certainty
congregating living hues of budding roses shall blow
winging seeds unseen, like the sweet breath of our vigilant ghost

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-08-12 10:09 AM


we reach our hail of certainty


you have "such" a mind...it can overwhelm.
I dislike zero's (0's) don't you?

hugss
M

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-08-12 10:31 AM


Makes me think of a druidic incantation or wiccan conjuration...  Seems that you achieve an alchemy of equilibrium between self and nature in this write -- much to ponder here...

-MVS

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QjQ
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3 posted 2003-08-12 12:05 PM


very good thoughts expressed,, i enjoyed reading,,

     


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4 posted 2003-08-12 04:55 PM


"collecting magnificent vapors, launching foam-like stone’s caress
bubbling, encircling, harps of wind to life yet unknown
announcing conscious furnishings, from past to present tones"


Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-08-12 05:05 PM


These incantations have stirred my Celtic blood...


EA

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