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When Someone Lies (twenty or less)
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When Someone Lies (twenty or less) |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Words elusive missing seams joy rides amusement themes Bits and pieces moons and tides inconclusive when someone lies Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Good job! I like this one, both in theme, style, and rhyme... and truth. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thanks .... can't let you have all the fun! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...sigh |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I like lying sometimes, as long as it doesn't hurt anyone.. But it usually does, shame on me.. I'll stop. These days you can't say your soap is green when it's really blue without getting into trouble.. Anyway, as I stop rambling.. Awesome write, always.. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sorry Dixie ... ~ ~ ~ didn't mean to cause a stir thanks for the read Meg ~ ~ ~ little "white" lies grow up to be big brothers but I agree, they're so cute when they are young! (don't change a thing - be you) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
excellent, I liked |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CTOwen~ I can think of a whole bunch of somebodies that should be reading this one~ Excellent~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Craig! Love it...and your 20 or less rhymes! ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Marge - I can think of twenty or more myself ... (hope they are not the same) Nancy - I knew you would be here sooner or later! I aim to please (heart, body, mind and soul) Thanks Ladies!! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sorry LJ, .... an honest mistake! Thanks for the read. |
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