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~*Tantalize*~
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since 2003-07-29
Posts 26
Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area)

0 posted 2003-08-11 11:31 PM


Hey guys, just wrote this, i dunno, lately my work has been fading, i can't write anymore, at least not like I want to, its like I lay in bed at night, stuck between asleep and awake, and I think of the best stuff, but then when I sit down to write it, I lose it all. Im frustrated, too many feelings, not enough words.

Love Jen
two people laying together
feel my heart against yours
come closer to me
open loves doors

the feeling of you
is like a feeling of bliss
you take me breath away
with each and every kiss

your gentle hands
slowly caressing mine
your touch feels amazing
i wish i could stop the time

stop the time
so we can lay here together
soaking up the love
and enjoying it forever

but wishing is only wishing
time will never stop
and my love for you will go forever
like the minutes on a clock

"There are moments in my life I will always remember, not because they were big events, but because you were there to make the worth remembering." ~Un

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wicka_basket
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since 2003-08-11
Posts 12

1 posted 2003-08-11 11:36 PM


Simply Beauty!
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