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wicka_basket
Junior Member
since 2003-08-11
Posts 12


0 posted 2003-08-11 11:29 PM




There's a smile on your face
I'm scared to let you in
You try to take me in your arms
But I won't let you win

I shake and shudder
I feel the pain within
You say you love me
But I won't let you win

You reach out to me
Soon you're closing in
I back away
Cuz I won't let you win

Fear is gripping me
You softly touch my chin
You want to kiss me
But I won't let you win

There's a smile on your face
I'm scared to let you in
You try to take me in your arms
But I won't let you win


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QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-08-11 11:42 PM


nice write n read,,,

     


Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2003-08-12 01:00 AM


i know how you feel, it's hard to let ppl in specialy if you have been hurt in the past.
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