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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-11 11:12 PM



You come around with your half-baked
Recipes for love
and villians,
and cocktail nuance explanations
Makes me wonder if they are ever clear
to you.

Brushing yourself off
of words that don't satisfy
Placing fingers in smoky regret
singed soulish eyes glare
Makes me wonder is it ever clear
to you.

hours of roll over in your bed,
think this day isn't done?
It never is ..eyes that never slumber
sleep tonight, another sleepless one won
Makes me wonder is it ever even foggy clear
to you.

And that smell, you know the one
senses burned with fear
someone would know you cared
I peeled you thick skinned, tender

Makes me wonder does it ever come clear
the things you do,
to you?



Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-11-2003 11:26 PM).]

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-08-11 11:39 PM


terrific penning,,,

     


SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-08-12 12:51 PM


Thanks QjQ... I am glad you liked.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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