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dreambuilder
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caddyshack

0 posted 2003-08-11 09:09 PM


Eyes of an Angel
Smile
Looking through me
She sings

Eyes of a Scorpion
Trace
Her every move
Held captive

Admiration
Unnoticed
She cannot see the shadow
For the darkness

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-08-11 09:34 PM


very very intrigued michael...........
dreambuilder
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caddyshack
2 posted 2003-08-11 11:30 PM


I have a passion for Tolkien


[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (08-12-2003 12:36 AM).]

gringakiwi
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3 posted 2003-08-11 11:43 PM


Simple yet Beautiful. Thanks !
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-08-12 12:30 PM


Hey I was thinking that very same thing
like Arweyn and Strider . . .
Am I right?
Nice to see you posting again
missed you here Mike
xxoo

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-08-12 04:11 AM


ooooo..wow
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-08-12 08:01 AM


funny thing about eyes and darkness...I can see a black bug crawling across a black floor even in the darkness...
shadows are easy to find...for me


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