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Duncan
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0 posted 2003-08-11 07:33 PM



Hold me
just close enough
to feel the heat
of your intent

I will allow
your heart
it’s every whim

© Copyright 2003 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-08-11 07:34 PM



O, dang!

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-08-11 07:41 PM


Just my heart?




yer smoldering, Dunc.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-08-11 07:42 PM


...Damn

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-08-11 08:12 PM



Golly goob, you're making it hard for us gals to breathe you know.

I loved the trail of your thoughts,
and the warmth of your intent.

Like a smoke ring day when the wind blows?    


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-08-12 04:22 AM


whew!
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
6 posted 2003-08-12 04:27 AM


The heat of intent...

*breathes...awe...*

Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2003-08-12 08:07 AM


(chuckling) Not bad at all for a slacker.... I'm surprised however, that you found the time to write something so sensitive and caring, with all the time and efort you put into keeping the facade of being a poech puppy.


Good to read you Dunc...

walker
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8 posted 2003-08-12 02:07 PM


Soooo.. Romantic, the style suits you well.
Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
9 posted 2003-08-12 03:58 PM


short and sweet! loved this!

Tequilia

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2003-08-12 04:08 PM


Is that an invitation?!?---Sounds good to me!



EA

Patricia
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Missouri
11 posted 2003-08-12 06:37 PM


Whoah!...need to turn down the A/C, pronto.

Patricia  

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