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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
I saw you for the first time while traveling somewhere between box scores and day dreams High above and looking down on the unaware, like uninvited gods to snippets of time captured and released as quickly as breathing in, breathing out A mish-mash-montage of humanity disconnected from an endless current of high-dwelling passerby's Till our eyes met and for an instant we discovered more than benign circumstance I saw in you weariness and a last clinging hope Within me, I felt you unravel something unrequited From the gravity of your weary eyes I can bear it no more and so, I look away |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*phew* this one made me sweat.. great one..indeed..yessir.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Within me, I felt you unravel something unrequited From the gravity of your weary eyes I can bear it no more and so, I look away sighing at the truth in this... M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW! Amazing sightful write...very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are stronger than you know look |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you have nice talent... will be watching |
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