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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2003-08-11 03:57 PM



edges of the universe , right before our eyes
i counted my blessings today , never so close to the waters that have no time , so near the abyss it was almost like it wasn't there
high up atop the cliff the glaciers called there own
what saved me in this frozen state , there were none to hear me slip , all but the spirit ghosts who stoped my desent
and why

feeling alive more than i have ever had
wake up calls come at just the right second
flirting with perfection the molecules are always right on time ....the sparkling lady of true luck
shined her fragment of beautiful light into mine
careful steps now i take , tippy toes all around
like the midnight mouse sneakin into the kitchen for his crumbs ... no blame for the intentions were golden hearted in their own
rest now for i know that the sun will rise with me and the moon shall put me to bed


         written by,     James Wolf III      
                  08-11-2003
                    

© Copyright 2003 James D Wolf III - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-11 06:26 PM


James,

wake up calls come at just the right second

good thing . . .
your ending is lovely
sleep sweet, my friend
xxoo

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2 posted 2003-08-11 06:27 PM


woah woah wwwooooah..

this is deep, hard hitting..

library..

aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2003-08-11 06:31 PM


lol thanks u 2 your both excellent poets , much luv

wolfy

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4 posted 2003-08-11 06:36 PM


nicely penned,,,

     


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