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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-11 03:52 PM

Symphony Of Strings

in tune with
a gnarled mess
each time I look
more not less
orchestrated by
a symphony of strings
where melody
fights to sing
song sung of me
in my own time
carried by notes
upon these vines
tangled to where
it all began
to be undone
I don’t know when
a lullaby both
sad and sweet
bent yet not broken
where the music meets
at times lost
within these lines
some forever gone
I’ve much to find
the thin and thick
they are a part
these strings that
lead to my heart

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-11 05:10 PM

Why this has no replies.. I have no idea..

for this is one of your best..indeed.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-08-11 05:59 PM

I think I know, Kaoru...maybe it hits to close to home, makes the reader see inward a little too far, feel it a little too strongly, more than they're ready for....

It's certainly not the quality of the poem -- this is excellent.

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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

3 posted 2003-08-11 06:55 PM

maestro!

Rf

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-08-11 09:23 PM

OneSlick~
Captivating perfection~
Ya' just get better and better~
Honest Injun !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-11 09:38 PM

I was lucky, i got to see this before all of you..phbllllllllllllllltt lol awesome red you know i know this

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

6 posted 2003-08-11 10:16 PM

you never disappoint...beauty and wisdom, what a combination!

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

7 posted 2003-08-12 12:23 PM

And what a beautiful heart it must be.
As always, Helen, incredible!

The only one that can hold you back is yourself.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2003-08-12 04:20 PM

where melody
fights to sing
song sung of me
in my own time
carried by notes
upon these vines
tangled to where
it all began
to be undone

Incredible images... this is excellent! *S*

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