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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-08-11 12:31 PM

Sweltering

tears pouring from skin
   anticipating
a year's caress of butterfly wings
   emitting

Absorbing

rays of hope, warming thin
   consuming
days of endless heated things
   drowning

Wishing

for a hot summer's breeze
   dreaming
... of her soothing tease

   longing

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-08-11 01:37 PM

This was great.

We've had many hot summer breezes here.
angelblueyes

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Member Rara Avis

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In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2003-08-11 04:34 PM

sail on.....the sea is calling

so is the breeze.....

ME~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

3 posted 2003-08-11 06:19 PM

great choice of words , i think theres a cool breeze headed your way

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since 2003-06-07

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where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-08-11 06:21 PM

though never said..

i really enjoy your stuff..

this one, in particular..reached to me.

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-08-19 08:51 AM

your words warm me evry time, be it summer or winter.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-08-19 09:04 AM

"Wishing

for a hot summer's breeze
dreaming
... of her soothing tease

longing"

Beautiful...this left me wanting more..
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

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