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dani
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since 2003-05-10
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0 posted 2003-08-11 05:40 AM



Why are things never over when they’re over
It can’t be helped it can’t be stopped
Even when your strongest wish is to end it
Your strength, it fails, does it not
All the people left forgotten
In this life of ease
Never questioning returning
This small world id just a tease

Why can’t the past be forgotten?
That’d be running from the truth
When the wind pushing you forward
Your past reveals your youth
You’re never grown till death comes
You never learn till you die
Life is just the beginning
Of that holy question “why?”

If your past comes back to haunt you
As it does with everyone
You’re not forgiven till it’s over
But you’re who you are because it’s done
If everyone ran backwards
Our world would be a mess
If all the people look around them
They’ll see everyone’s taking the same test

‘cos that is all life is
An examination hall
Where a pass is to look forward
And to fail is to fall

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minoune
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since 2003-08-10
Posts 87
Canada
1 posted 2003-08-11 09:21 AM


Sounds to me like you have learned many lessons and are a strong willed, and positive person always looking for the good in things.  Refreshing to say the least and an excellent write.

minoune

dani
Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 46

2 posted 2003-08-11 11:09 AM


thanks
it was inspired bye lennons imagine

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