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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-08-11 12:02 PM



There is a time for thinking where our lives will lead
a time for feeling and letting them be.

There is a time for holding back so all is not lost
and a time for giving what comes naturally.

A time for reason that helps to understand
and a time for romance that counters our caution.

There is a time for understanding without complicating
that fills the heart to compacity.

And then there is you,
that counts for my time well spent.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-11-2003 12:03 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-08-11 12:04 PM


--and, my Dear Lori, every poem of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading, has been "time well spent"!


Linda

icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2003-08-11 12:09 PM


Well, yes, for everything there is a season.

Excellent writing my friend.

Thank you for sharing.

aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2003-08-11 12:30 PM


you sum the end up with a kiss , good words

wolfy

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4 posted 2003-08-11 02:37 AM


reading you is "time well spent", dear lady
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-08-11 03:13 AM


awesome write !


suthern
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6 posted 2003-08-11 12:34 PM


I was nodding in agreement all the way through... big smile at the end. *S*

I like this very much, Bluesy One! *S*

angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-08-11 01:32 PM


There is a time for everything.Nicely done here
angelblueyes

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8 posted 2003-08-11 01:34 PM


Hiya bluesy! and yes, I'm lucky to have someone like that too. Now if I only had more TIME...

it's always something with me, yanno?

loved this.


littlewing
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9 posted 2003-08-11 06:37 PM


This is beautiful!
Bluesy . . . good for you!
I love this adore it . . .
tweets
xxoo

Robert Frazier
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10 posted 2003-08-11 06:46 PM


thanks for sharing such a beautiful testimony to a relationship worth all our longing.

Rf

Kaoru
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11 posted 2003-08-11 06:48 PM


Beautiful.
vandana
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12 posted 2003-08-11 06:52 PM


loved it
Duncan
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13 posted 2003-08-11 08:31 PM


"There is a time for understanding without complicating
that fills the heart to compacity.

And then there is you,
that counts for my time well spent."

It's cool to be understood huh?  And mutually admired...   You are good at makin' me smile Bluesy!  

Cpat Hair
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14 posted 2003-08-12 08:31 AM


nicely done... as usual.. lol.. I enjoyed!

ctowen
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15 posted 2003-08-12 09:00 AM


Felt like I was on one of those
carnival rides that dip, turn, twist ...

... but the last part took me for a loop!

   Sometimes life can be a ride,
      you just gotta hold on
         and ride her through.

               ~ Always ~

Tequilia_Sunrise
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16 posted 2003-08-12 09:05 AM


Beautiful
nakdthoughts
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17 posted 2003-08-12 11:11 AM


I can't tell if you are up or down or spinning around..
but I liked this one
hope you had a nice vacation
hugss
M

Krishankins
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18 posted 2003-08-12 12:18 PM


Most impressive write! Time is indeed well spent when it is with someone deserving of such a compliment.

The only one that can hold you back is yourself.

BloomingRose
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19 posted 2003-08-12 12:23 PM


There is a time for everthing, and if we can realize what's worth doing, and what's NOT then indeed it's time well spent.
Not always easy to figure, and often easier said than done.
You said it well!

Deb

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20 posted 2003-08-12 05:11 PM


Hi Ms Blues...beautifully done!...

And then there is you,
that counts for my time well spent.


enjoyed muchly.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
21 posted 2003-08-12 07:55 PM


You are all so sweet, thank you~
Hey, I got myself a muse for the time being!!

oh happy days are here again!!  

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