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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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People all around me, voices, eyes, intonations.... Rescue me, surround me with crowds of you. [This message has been edited by Ratleader (08-11-2003 09:00 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ratleader - oh yes, do I know these thoughts... BC |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ahhh Wouldn't that be nice! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
would be nice, wouldn't it? |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
what a wonderful way to tell someone you love and need them...very nice post minoune |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A great poem, in a few words. Jason |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
indeed a lovely thought, when one can actually be surrounded by the one they love, even in a crowd...  Lauren~ The way you move me |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a respite you request. *S* Some crowds can be so chaotic... you're asked for a crowding of cherish. *S* Absolutely beautiful! *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...love what suthern said about a crowd of cherish...lots of meaning here in a few short words. That's good poetry...wish I could write it like that instead of going on and on...oops, like I seem to be doing now. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Short, but sweet. angelblueyes |
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