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symphony_of_thoughts
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0 posted 2003-08-10 10:37 PM



Jazz waves
I float away
Jazz waves
I don't wanna be saved

Cool, funk, jazz
Icey hot touch
Give me that fused pezazz
It's never too much

Funky afro man with the black shoes
Where are you going with that song
The beat's in the race, never gonna lose
I'm on a river of notes, ever so long

Tasteless, but spicey, sensual, smacks
Give my mind up for the minute
Hear your metal filled, clingey clacks
My opinions sizing for your fit

I wait for the beat to stop
But hoping for the not
Hearing your drum and foot clop
My soul stands alive, no rot

Express the slow moving,crazed, clickity-clacks
Express your emotion in one tick
The icey cool flow, like some tic-tacs
Give the song that unknown flick

I stand amazed and bedazzled
You fuse me to the beat
My mind remains frazzled
By the overflowing heat

I lose myself, getting lost
Don't try and save me
Because my worries have been tossed
Don't be blind, try to see

Don't even think
Lay your mind to rest
For this evergoing moment
Slumbering on an ocean crest

Jazz waves
I float away
Jazz waves
I don't wanna be saved


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Magia_negra
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1 posted 2003-08-10 11:00 PM


I feel the music

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
   mi vida...

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2 posted 2003-08-11 06:02 PM


you fuse me to the beat
a great line

Kaoru
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3 posted 2003-08-11 06:05 PM


This is cool!
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