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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-08-10 10:21 PM


it's over
the words escape my mouth
i feel the sting of regret
you stop moving
stop breathing
i can see the pain in your eyes
i'm sorry
i never meant it
your mine
always
i would never hurt you
but i know i did
i wish i could take them back
but i can't
whats done is done
i've already left
i wish it didnt have to be like this
i wish everything could be like it was 10 years ago
but i'm not who i was then
and neither are you
we grew apart
and no matter how hard we try
it will never be the same
i'm sorry...

"when everything feels like the movies,
you bleed just to know your alive"
-Goo goo dolls


© Copyright 2003 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
eminor_angel
Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323
Canada
1 posted 2003-08-10 10:40 PM


this is so sad!! man, the memories. you do an excellent job of bringing them back up. thank you for the tears, sometimes we need them.
Lexia
Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111
Nowhere
2 posted 2003-08-10 11:02 PM


This is so sad. Great job displaying the emotions.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-08-11 05:17 AM


sometimes you gotta be logical instead of emotional
minoune
Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87
Canada
4 posted 2003-08-11 07:14 AM


This is a poem many people can relate to.  As we grow, we change, not because we choose to, it just happens and in ways we have no control over.   You can fall out of love... just as you can fall in love.... its not meant to hurt, or to happen, but it does and we have to follow our hearts....
I really connected with this... wonderful post..

minoune

Bec
Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475
Canberra
5 posted 2003-08-11 08:56 AM


Hi exhale...

I know what that's like! You've captured the pain and regret, but ultimately we soldier on! Great write.

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
6 posted 2003-08-11 09:39 AM


Get out of my marriage!
great write.

Jason

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
7 posted 2003-08-11 03:45 PM


Yep..minus a couple of additions and there you go! My marriage as well...

Excellent writing.

Susan

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