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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-10 09:05 PM

The soft fall of uncut hair
reminds me, as it covers eyes
of all you hid, and never felt

The soft curve of boyish jaw
dimpled cheek, reminds me
you're harder than you seem

Underneath desire to be seen
is that to be held in love
away from all who misread you

when they see you

In silence accustomed to us
losing psychadelic train of thought
murmur and point, avoiding my eyes

Need never to see you again
if this is all I get...

Nor any promise that you DID
and still DO, for it is lie upon lie
suffocated by one another, long found out.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-08-10 09:49 PM

What a clever title, "Kleptomaniac of hearts"! I am intrigued by how your poetic mind works!

LL

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-10 10:13 PM

Some people never learn..total fool.
One of your finest Gem, small suggestion? I like the title simply as kleptomaniac.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-11 02:09 AM

Nor any promise that you DID
and still DO, for it is lie upon lie
suffocated by one another, long found out.

Yeah, Gemma, once they start telling you lies,
they just get bigger and bigger. You can't believe
a word they say, then. I know from past esperience.
Hugs to you

Ethel

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-08-11 02:13 AM

I love the way you describe things, Gem..

This is damn good..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-08-11 03:17 AM

you never cease to amaze me

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

6 posted 2003-08-11 04:28 AM

yet another good one

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2003-08-11 12:38 PM

Has anyone seen my breath?

... I seem to have lost it as I read this.

True to heart, Gem.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2003-08-11 03:20 PM

Hey I know this guy!! Yea, Ditto what she said..

Great job with the emotion of it..

Susan

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