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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2003-08-10 06:21 PM



Resting in a dream cloud the little bird spoke aloud
the hidden jewels sleep sound in old caverns forgotten...
no time for thoughts now as magic pours fourth
Shadowgates holding passage to another relm dimly lit, which believes the dawn will hold another day...
Past lessons taught once again, from ancient texts the vision is saught in eastern ways atop the mountains peak, emerging from the riddles maze....
beholding that you seek

                         JDWIII 3-23-03
                              12:06 pm

© Copyright 2003 James D Wolf III - All Rights Reserved
Gabriel Frost
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1 posted 2003-08-10 07:01 PM


This is deep and profound. I love it, its true, life and learning is a never ending cycle!
eminor_angel
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2 posted 2003-08-10 07:15 PM


welcome to passions, and good write. you should be writing fantasy!
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-08-10 07:36 PM


Welcome to Passions.

I loved the mystery and the feel of ancient wisdom and truth of discovery in this...

I do look forward to reading more.

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2003-08-10 07:48 PM


Welcome to Passions! fantasy is your gift of writing...thanks for taking me on one!

~Thanks ARH

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-08-10 07:57 PM


James . . .
and the shaman speaks . . .
xxoo

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-08-10 09:57 PM


Excellent. Welcome to Passions.
Look forward to your art. TD

aujussy wolf
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7 posted 2003-08-10 10:06 PM


thanks everyone , the site is great such a opertunity to meet other writers and to learn from eachother toooo hey i am a michigander myself northern lower half that is ..cool to see another person from the mitten
wolfy

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