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night travller( or maybe depression)
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night travller( or maybe depression) |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
night traveller ( or maybe depression?) Weary the traveller climbs life's hill The way is long and the night so still Silent the white owl in her flight She cares not for the travellers plight Long gone day's last fading light All is lost ,no way in sight What dread sprits walk abroad? In fear our traveller calls the Lord "My soul is lost,no hope in sight Send me Lord some guiding light," Silent the moon from behind the cloud Lights the hillside all around We are but travellers of life's brief day If you brother,sister ,have lost your way Then call upon the Lord and pray. arthur |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michael, This write is one of the deepest emotional pieces I have seen from you. I don't find it depressing..but so very true to life. Life, as we know it, is over in the blink of an eye.. and if one of us has lost our way, we need only to ask Him in prayer to lead us. Wonderfully written my friend across the pond. ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
Excellent write!  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Art , this is a moving journey ... the rhyme is quite nice , uplifting wolfy |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Emotional write.. penned wonderfully.. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So loving, and very touching! Loved reading this because it's so forgiving of our human frailties.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-11-2003 06:14 PM).] |
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