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Do You Ever Sleep?
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Do You Ever Sleep? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Do you ever sleep? I ask this as if I do.. Sometimes I wonder if it's because we don't drink enough water. Well, that's what my mother says.. a warm bath is the cure for everything. Somehow, I marked with ink, the words I wanted to remember. Perhaps just a gentle reminder of what inspired me to stay alive in the first place. Yeah, you promised eternity, forever..and so many words that mean the same thing. god forbid we remember what brought us together to begin with. for the sake of my sanity you left me out of this. Unfortunately, I was one of the main characters in this little act we called beckoning love.. Opening night just won't be the same if I can't recall my lines.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
its all a drama isnt it, and sometimes we get stuck with crappy actors and hack directors |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somehow, I marked with ink, the words I wanted to remember. Perhaps just a gentle reminder of what inspired me to stay alive in the first place. ~*~ Consider yourself bookmarked as a favorite read...  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
...left on the cutting room floor |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
this reminded me of a lisa loeb song, this was an incredible write, good good job  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I never read this, i'm so ashamed! ack, the end, I never remember what i want to say..like now. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
To paraphrase Dear William, "All the world's a stage and we are the players on it." Pensive write--and lovely as usual.   EA |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I could use a warm bath, but these words will do in a pinch.  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
god forbid we remember what brought us together to begin with. Ouch!! Been here, done this, bought the wardrobe. Awesome write. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love the drama here, love the drama .........a true dramamama |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
simple, honest, and true-to-life. your informal language and bluntness really make it hard not to feel it. you make tragic reality beautiful. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well...now I know what is wrong with me...I only have a shower! I for one, like a little drama...keeps things balanced... I also love how you write..(as you know) Susan |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
This is really great Kaoru. :-) |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Always could count on you for a wonderful write I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a brilliant emotional write! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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