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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2003-08-10 02:22 PM




{For Wranx & Brian}


Carefree days of summer
White linen and lace
Promises on your lips
Love on my face

Communion by the bank
Set ripples in motion
Exchange feet for fins
Dive into these oceans

Dive into my ocean
And set yourself free
Come in and measure
Each scale of me

Wash ashore at midnight
Well loved & replete
Weighed down in seaweed
So peaceful and sweet

Carefree days of summer
White linen and lace
Promises on his lips
Love on my face...


~Tier

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-10 02:29 PM


Woah, this
is very beautiful.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-10 02:32 PM


Carefree days of summer
White linen and lace
Promises on his lips
Love on my face...

Tier, this is so bautiful.  
Hugs  
Ethel


littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-08-10 08:16 PM


Tier . . . this reminds me of all of you as I have been dusting off the dark shelves . . .

Beautiful tribute from one amazing poetess to two brilliant minds . . .
xxoo

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-08-10 10:04 PM


"Communion by the bank
Set ripples in motion
Exchange feet for fins
Dive into these oceans"

~ if only....


EA



wranx
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5 posted 2003-08-10 10:36 PM


Doggone, Tier!

Very happy to think that something I've written may have helped bring this about.

I think perhaps, it was there all along.

Thank you.

Ed

brian sites
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6 posted 2003-08-11 10:58 PM


this  is a salty breeze
of honor

like a day
with
jamaicabrain

smiling at you Tier

thank you

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