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0 posted 2003-08-10 02:18 PM



Webshots Fantasy Art Photo

~~**~~
She was in a place of space
between awake and asleep
The scenes before her eyes
such fantasies she wanted to keep

It was completely magical
this wondrous feeling of flow
She held out her arm to look
yes, her body was all aglow

She felt as if she were floating
on a cloud as soft as snow
As she lay back to relax
looking at scenes unfold so slow

They were scenes from the dreams
she had dreamt of on many nights
With fairies and enchanting fantasies
in a land filled with desires and delights

There were castles of mystical beauty
floating in glorious space
She saw herself and her dear Love
such peace upon their face

They were floating on the same cloud
the love and contentment felt she
No trouble or trials of this life was there
everything was happiness and glee

Such fulfillment here they feel
in this wonderful place in space
Their feelings deep inside
show clearly on their face

Yes, she was in a place of space
between awake and asleep
The scenes before her eyes
such fantasies she wanted to keep
~~**~~


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Lexia
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1 posted 2003-08-10 02:20 PM


So peaceful, tranquil, like the innocence of a child.

Great write.

Lex

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2 posted 2003-08-10 02:26 PM


Thank you, Lex. I appreciate
your response.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-08-10 03:06 PM


Oooh, this is beautiful..you spoke some of the thousand words that picture is worth!

Wonderful, doll.

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4 posted 2003-08-10 03:33 PM


best not to wake up!
arthur

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5 posted 2003-08-10 03:37 PM


Thank you, Karou. You always say the
nicest things. I appreciate it, too.
You are so sweet.  
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Arthur, I know. LOL Thanks for your reply. I
appreciate it.  
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Hugs to you both  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-08-10 04:45 PM


You have a beautiful heart mind and soul.

made me feel all calm and content again for a moment.

one of your best here lady.


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7 posted 2003-08-10 05:05 PM


Oh Ethel!!
This has to be your best by far!
Beautiful...magical...exquisite!
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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8 posted 2003-08-10 06:25 PM


fabulous penning,,,,

    


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9 posted 2003-08-10 06:58 PM


Pretty thoughts Ethel...from a pretty woman.
TD

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10 posted 2003-08-10 10:29 PM


Ethel Mae, you've outdone yourself! Everything about this post is magical and fills me with a sense of joy and wonder!


Linda

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11 posted 2003-08-10 10:55 PM


funny thing, just last night . . .
and dreams really are part of us

enjoyed this

Kraw'

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12 posted 2003-08-10 11:49 PM


Gemma, thank you. I'm so glad that you liked it
and that it made you feel calm and content, even
if just for a moment. I really hope that things
will be better with you real soon. Heart:
hugs  
Ethel Mae

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13 posted 2003-08-10 11:51 PM


Thank you so much, Nancy. That makes me
fell good for you to say that. I really
do appreciate you.  
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Glenn, I'm glad that you liked it.
Thank you.  
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Hugs to both of you  
Ethel

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14 posted 2003-08-11 12:00 PM


Kathleen, thank you very much.
That's sweet of you to say.
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Linda,  I'm so glad that it made
you feel good. Thank you.
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Krawdad, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And, I do believe they are part of us.
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Hugs  to you all  
Ethel

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