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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-08-10 02:04 PM



A life together and pin cushion state
Reverend at a pause
Gentle her kiss

Sweet and kind was my bride
Jokes and play
Tickled little laugh

Better now than before
Unity bound eternity
Praise to her make her smile

Light in the air
This beauty screams hurt
Young innocent infant being

From an imperfect past
Complete circle to bliss
Tall and proud joy rewards

My father on sight
My mother here too
Life is great and thanx to you

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Im not married and dont have any kids.  I was just trying something new.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-10 02:25 PM


"A life together and pin cushion state
Reverend at a pause
Gentle her kiss

Sweet and kind was my bride
Jokes and play
Tickled little laugh"


cool

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2 posted 2003-08-10 02:40 PM


Craig, it's good to try something new. I posted one like I don't usually today, too. I especially liked this part of your poem...

Better now than before
Unity bound eternity
Praise to her make her smile


My favorite kind of poem to write are love poems. I've got them scattered all through Open and the Archives. LOL
Hugs  
Ethel


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