Angel adrift (inspired by the Sirens' song)

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-08-10 12:35 PM

Take a walk with me Angel
To the quay with me Angel
Let me look into your face
As you leave this place
Drifting down the river from me, Angel

Drift away from me Angel
Far away from me Angel
I can still hear your voice
Though you’ve left no choice
But to let you drift away, Angel

Do you love me still Angel?
Will you always love me Angel?
When your soul slips free
To mingle in the breeze
Will you still have love for me, Angel?

We’ll be together always Angel
Together for eternity, Angel
When we’re both in heaven
I hear all things are forgiven
Won’t we always be together then

My Angel?

[This message has been edited by wranx (08-10-2003 12:35 PM).]

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-08-10 12:41 PM

Loved your inspiration wranx.
Where are you guys getting this stuff?

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

2 posted 2003-08-10 12:48 PM

Ed...this is covered with light, yet heavy with sadness. Love feels that way many times.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-08-10 12:50 PM

This was great.I can feel the despair and hope int his.May you guys just keep getting better and better.I enjoy so reading your writes

angelblueyes

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

4 posted 2003-08-10 12:53 PM

Oh My God, you have no idea how much I adore this . . . truly . . .
what ever has inspired you for this has touched me deeply personally Ed
Absolutely beautiful
xxoo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-08-10 12:53 PM

Hauntingly beautful...wonderfully penned,
and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-08-10 01:13 PM

I loved the questioned ending here Ed, with the reference to heaven.

Left ME smiling, wondering who was wondering about the intent. Yanno what I mean?

Of course ya do.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-08-10 01:18 PM

Well, Ed, like some of the others, I don't know who was the inspiration, but I sure am glad you were inspired. This is a beautiful poem, Sir Poet. I really enjoyed reading.

We’ll be together always Angel
Together for eternity, Angel
When we’re both in heaven
I hear all things are forgiven
Won’t we always be together then

I really loved this ending.
Hugs

Ethel

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

8 posted 2003-08-10 01:22 PM

I can always conjure this up again, yes?

Always nice to see a man pleading...

*chuckles*

Loved it!

Tier

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

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New Caney, Tx

9 posted 2003-08-10 02:15 PM

Dark to more of a greyish color. This was nice. I enjoy everything you write though. I think some of it inspires me.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-08-10 03:28 PM

I'm not going to ask
where this inspiration is coming from,
only that you keep
putting it here
for our pleasure!

arthur
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since 2001-08-14

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england

11 posted 2003-08-10 03:32 PM

some loves are never forgotten
we just learn to live with the loss
arthur

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-08-16 01:46 AM

Oh my, Ed...this is simply beautiful.

I just love the whole 'feel' of this. More, please?

Hugs to you, friend..
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

13 posted 2003-08-16 11:12 AM

Ed! This is very lovely. And I love the question at the end, we won't know until the end, will we?

Good to read you again!

Cor

MoniDaPoet
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since 2003-08-14

Posts 73
California, USA

14 posted 2003-08-16 12:06 PM

This is truly lovely! The world would be a better place if more men could express themselves like this!

I have only my genius to declare!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

15 posted 2003-08-16 12:12 PM

There is a beautiful lightness to this SONG, even though the topic is melancholic.
Loved this much.
Love, Margherita

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