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A Dedication
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A Dedication |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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A Dedication  She closes the book removes her glasses her hand passing over the poet’s printed name ~ she has known many Patricias in her lifetime however, this Patricia’s poetry Settling leaves her unsettled with thoughts wandering as far as her inner eye might see and she tries to pull back her beliefs from the sky to tie them like ribbons on the barbed wire that she might see them wave in the wind. ~*~ Inspired by Patricia Ranzoni Dedicated to P.P. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-10-2003 11:46 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful tribute to a poet that has touched you deeply, I see. Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful dedications to a wonderful poetess. Perfectly penned Karilea..and love the pic! ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A beautiful tribute to a beautiful poettess. Both of you have touched the heart of many. angelblueyes |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
________________________________ from Another Long by: Patricia Ranzoni Something delicate, say something pastel and yet furry, something freeing itself from ice unseen but known something that in its saying something is borne say something flown. _____________________________ Karilea, I am learning to pull gifts from the sky... to hear the words and see the signs. My dear sister of verse, you have taught me so much in a short time. One day I shall fly with my own wings of intuition, but as I take to the air, you will never leave me. You are forever a part of me. Love Always, My Dear, Patricia [This message has been edited by Patricia (08-10-2003 03:39 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is great, i had images in my head..letting my imagination run wild.. awesome. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well done dear lady. Inspiration taken, woven and given as a gift to us all. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very nice replies, poets. Thank you! Patricia Ranzoni is a very interesting read. You can HEAR her eastern accent as you read her poetry... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
she tries to pull back her beliefs from the sky to tie them like ribbons on the barbed wire --------- now that is very special writing... regards to you Karilea, Sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, Karilea, you have penned beautifully for Patricia. I beautiful dedication to a beautiful poetess. hugs you Maree  fate is not just |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It if wonderful to see the binding of souls that occus through poetry. Lovely dedication, Karilea. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, you are yourself an inspiration. Sandra |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a charming tale of a deep bond, told with much heart. Now I need to read some of Patricia's work. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Above the theme of this fine write is the sense that women can exchange such soul-sister feelings with such warmth and sincerity. Men have all they can do to convey it to the one they love. lol KJ Well done! Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting that you say that, KayJay. I've had many Patricias walk into my life, from grade school through current day. All have offered me a unique perspective to life. I am grateful for each and every one of them... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a wonderful tribute, written from the high ground of heart always held high. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely Karilea...lovely. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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