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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-08-10 11:05 AM



Waiting For a Friend

I know someone who sits outside
Just staring at the sky
He's waiting for an angel
And wonders if she will ever sit by his side

He goes and takes walks in the park
He sees others playing around
Hugging and holding hands
Still he walks alone, leaving his footprints in the sand

Time for him has never been an issue
But sometimes feels he's getting old
He even feels he has miss his chance
And his nights are very cold

For now he will still sit outside
And keep looking to the sky
Waiting for the angel
And catch her when he hears her cry


"Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel, has been turned off" author unknown

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angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-08-10 11:06 AM


This is full of such longing and hope.Know that the sweetest of angels will come and grasp that hand.For that sweetest of hearts desereves the sweetest of angels
angelblueyes

Lexia
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2 posted 2003-08-10 02:22 PM


This is so sorrowful yest, still hopeful. A great write.


Alexia

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garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-08-10 02:31 PM


For now he will still sit outside
And keep looking to the sky
Waiting for the angel
And catch her when he hears her cry


Aww, I hope he finds her.  
Hugs  
Ethel


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4 posted 2003-08-10 02:52 PM


This made me think

crickets
wet grass

and an abundance of stars.

angel..indeed..

beautiful write.

aujussy wolf
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5 posted 2003-08-10 09:47 PM


you really hit the spot with you writing , i deja vu .. i know how this man feels
a perfect capture
wolfy

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