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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 The poet exhales pussy-willow thoughts as pungent humid air stifles creativity While the yellowtail opens closes opens closes with thought of flight and the Rose ’o Sharon had already passed on. Poet, mute as the insect licks her soul and readies for the battle of will over rejection… filling the inkwell once more. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea "Poet, mute as the insect licks her soul and readies for the battle of will over rejection… filling the inkwell once more." You forgot the last line....where the poet flies!  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is beautiful.Your writing seems so effortlessly written and with such heart  angelblueyes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea...your words flow across the page so effortlessly. Teach me how to do this....please?! ~Hugs YOU!~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
beautiful  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ My goodness ... I think you've been lens-toeing around my garden~ Lovely, lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
and readies for the battle of will over rejection… Ready for the battle with my pen in hand. But my will neglects to hear my command. I stuggle tonight...can't get it "write". Perhaps a matter of stage fright? I think I shall go back for another read of this verse full of beautiful images and lovely flow... and then I'll see what happens when I give it another go. Yes ma'm, much enjoyed! Patricia |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Soft and lovely Karilea. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, everyone. I wish I had been fast enough to get a photo with the swallowtail's wings opened...but she was too quick for me! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh and she is beautiful Karilea, as is your poem. While the yellowtail opens closes opens closes with thought of flight You definately captured it m'dear Maree fate is not just |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Karilea, The poet exhales pussy-willow thoughts as pungent humid air stifles creativity Oh, how I can relate! Stifling, steamy air and it not only affects creativity, it affects everything. This photo is magnificent. My Rose of Sharon bushes are just blooming. I must go out later when the sun moves lower and check for butterflies. I so love your writing and pictures. Hugs, Marti |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Gosh this is gorgeous! Deb |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Sunshine, this is nice, its nice to have a picture accompany your words. By the way did my Butterfly Migrate to your garden?  or maybe they are twins. |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Still love your work, great to read again. Dennis |
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