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Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-10 08:56 AM




Temptation

What is your deepest desire?
You crave this thing, this delicacy.
You feelyour heart is on fire.
You toss and turn, you will not give in.
You awake in the middle of the night,
craving.
You will not give in to this sin.
You walk out in the morning sun.
There right in front
of
you is your deepest desire.
Oh! Sweet temptation.
How can I leave?
I will give into this
sinful delicacy.
Just this once.
Oh! How scrumptious.
How delectable.
“CHOCOLATE!”

Bonnie J.

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-08-10 09:01 AM


My desires are in direct conflict with each other...

I love to run
I smoke
I like to be a size 5-6
I love to eat

Oh I could go on...

Chocolate..yum...if you like coffee...try starbucks ice cream...omg...heaven!!

Very cute write Bonnie!

Susan

angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-08-10 09:02 AM


A good first morning's read.Choc is mmm mmm good.Nicely done and loved the playfulness in this.
angelblueyes

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2003-08-10 10:43 AM


Well Bonnie you can't do this to me! Now I'll crave for the chocolate icecream ....
You see how your lovely words influence me?

Love and pleasure with chocolate .... yes I definitely am a chocolate fan.
Margherita


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