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brian sites
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0 posted 2003-08-10 01:31 AM



how does one heart
        
           duet?

siamese-souled
and the words
        
           whetted
by joined

     lips

we will
           doit

everyday

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1 posted 2003-08-10 01:33 AM


Brian,

This is a great write, original and creative.. I dig it.

brian sites
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2 posted 2003-08-10 01:43 AM


thanks Meghan
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3 posted 2003-08-10 01:53 AM


Everyday works for me ... hahahah ... this is sooooo interesting to read and think about.

Great write here.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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4 posted 2003-08-10 02:41 AM


cool! short and strong
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5 posted 2003-08-10 10:00 AM


Short, Sensual, and sweet...


Enjoyed!

~Tier

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6 posted 2003-08-10 10:20 AM



Ah...Bravo!  

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7 posted 2003-08-10 10:23 AM


This is short,senous, and sweet
angleblueyes

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8 posted 2003-08-10 10:47 AM


brian

indeed!

why duet when you can doit?  

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9 posted 2003-08-10 01:01 PM


and I have that in writing now...




littlewing
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10 posted 2003-08-11 06:50 PM


Ok LMAOOO sorry Bri blame the two who share your brain . . .

I loved this
xxoo

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11 posted 2003-08-11 06:53 PM


liked it
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12 posted 2003-08-31 02:46 AM



Every day, huh?...

Waving up to one VERY happy witch...grin.

Don't know how I missed this, Brian...but I love it.

Hugs, you..

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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