My Heart Continues to Believe in Chance

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-10 12:26 PM

I haven't got much to
offer..
just the entirety of who I am..
my heart, my soul
and the lot of things,
that build and almost
fester
inside of me.

Trust that I suffer,
I'll be damned if you don't
believe..
Why, even the smallest things
are what I've been lacking.

Importance was always defined by
priority..
And I'll never stop trying to be
at the tip top of the
ongoing list.

I'll keep loving you as
though the flowers never
withered
with old age..

But I know there's got to be more
to me
than what you've already claimed..
So tell me, gingerly
romantically,
poetically..how I've been
underlined beside your name..

So when people ask why, I'll say,
why not?
Have ye not been filled with
desires rage?

Slightly
remembering the words..
tell me..ease my pain.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2003-08-10 01:13 AM

So much emotion I know too much about but you said it better then I ever could! This is unreal. I love this.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2003-08-10 01:42 AM

why not?
Have ye not been filled with
desires rage?

you ask the question
so well

your heart screams out
here

nice

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-10 02:39 AM

very powerful!

love the ending lines

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-08-10 09:39 AM

Meg,

I somehow missed this before...very glad I found it...you continue to amaze me with everything you write..

Susan

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-10 04:14 PM

just the entirety of who I am..
thats a great gift you offer, someone's to stupid to accept it or work with it you move on just dont stop believing(says the hypocrite)

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (08-10-2003 04:16 PM).]

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

6 posted 2003-08-10 04:32 PM

meg, you write with such certinty realizing we all grow and change with time , as do our ideas of who we are and what makes life bright and what makes it dark .. ... the planetary pulls were at your side with this one though, and you have a good sense of direction in mind , jwolf

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2003-08-10 07:15 PM

Chance? .... isn't that a card in some game?

         Go directly to my heart.
         Do cruise by GO!
         Do collect all the broken parts!

            An excellent write, thank you for the read.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

8 posted 2003-08-10 07:42 PM

very good write,,,

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

9 posted 2003-08-10 07:55 PM

Yes, this is a very powerful piece. And very familiar of a feeling.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

10 posted 2003-08-10 07:58 PM

I've felt that before, I liked this it was full of energy and power!

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

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