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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-08-09 07:58 PM


“FROM FINGER’S OF GRACE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Rhythm’s soul plays on this loving guitar,
as you dance within silhouettes shadow,
I see you in harmonies delicate charm,
your comfort will soothe to the morrow…

Enticing are my finger’s touch of strings,
as I play lover’s chords from deep within,
notes are of passion, they whisper and sigh,
your eyes close gently to listen, as I sin…

My words are more than the deepest blues,
they blend into, as I strum at a sexy pace,
I look into eyes that pierce all through,
and sounds float by from fingers of grace…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-08-09 09:03 PM


Enticing are my finger’s touch of strings,
as I play lover’s chords from deep within,
notes are of passion, they whisper and sigh,
your eyes close gently to listen, as I sin…

Bill,
...Nice touch.

(smiling)...this was very sensual and quite innocent in it's wandering charm. TD

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-08-09 09:28 PM


Very sensual and romantic Bill!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Snowflake From Hell
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3 posted 2003-08-09 09:43 PM


well...certainly makes ya think of a harmonious state of mind, yet makes ya think otherwise at the same time

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends.   Godsmack

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-08-09 09:47 PM


fabulous write,,,

    


Ivy Rose
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5 posted 2003-08-09 10:00 PM


Bill...Truly you are gifted. This is such an exquisite piece. Love the harmony in the notes of love you weave. ***Ivy Rose
Paul Wilson
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6 posted 2003-08-09 10:19 PM


Bill...You Da Man. Play on Play on. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2003-08-09 10:40 PM


hmmmmmmmm...as I sit here tonight, candles burning...I take your words in like the warmth of a smooth wine and a lovers fingers on my back...so sweet and relaxing.

Susan

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8 posted 2003-08-10 09:58 AM


I knew anything with such a title would have to be beautiful... and this is. *S*
Margherita
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9 posted 2003-08-10 10:20 AM


Bill, such a groovy atmosphere you created with these fingers of grace!
Love, Margherita

angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-08-10 10:25 AM


Love the atmosphere, the flow, and the imagery you've created here.You are sensual, romantic, and wonderful in your writes.
angelblueyes

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11 posted 2003-08-10 10:26 AM


BillCharles~
I ALWAYS enjoy the music-from-your heart~

This is lovely~

Will get to that 'other piece' done for you as soon as I get a chance ... Honest Injun !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-08-10 01:30 PM


Mr. Romance, you've done it again......
just beautiful, this is. And this part is heavenly....

Enticing are my finger’s touch of strings,
as I play lover’s chords from deep within,
notes are of passion, they whisper and sigh,
your eyes close gently to listen, as I sin


Hugs  
Ethel

walker
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13 posted 2003-08-10 01:51 PM


Lovely
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