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Ankaria
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Sask. Canada

0 posted 2003-08-09 03:18 PM



We slowly moan away
      No longer lingering-
We hear what you say.

We are the dead
      We are gone but we still sing-
Rest your tired head.

We lived the long journey
      A thousand memories upon your smile-
We are Not returning.

Hear us smile, hear us sing
      It will be your last time-
You will see wonderful things.

We are the dead
      We are gone but we still sing-
Rest your tired head...

Ankaria
   "Is all we see or seem, but a dream within a dream?"
                   -Edgar Allen Poe

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Ankaria
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1 posted 2003-08-09 03:58 PM


Thanks for the input everyone..
Gabriel Frost
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Between midnight thoughts
2 posted 2003-08-09 06:03 PM


well i liked it at least!
shucks, it was haunting but damn realistic!

Gabriel Frost
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Between midnight thoughts
3 posted 2003-08-09 06:03 PM


well i liked it at least!
shucks, it was haunting but damn realistic!

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4 posted 2003-08-10 06:50 PM


behind all the darkness lay a hidden chamber of secrets ... that only the dead behold ..
wolf

Third Libra
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5 posted 2003-08-10 06:54 PM


I liked this one a lot (of course that may be because it is one of my obsessions). Good stuff.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22
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6 posted 2003-08-10 06:58 PM


yahoo! another Saskatchewanite! I'm from Saskatoon, myself. Please drop me a comment or something to tell me where you live.

haunting poem, very good.

Ankaria
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since 2003-07-26
Posts 35
Sask. Canada
7 posted 2003-08-10 11:22 PM


Ahh it's good to see another saskatooner. How can I message you?

Ankaria
   "Is all we see or seem, but a dream within a dream?"
                   -Edgar Allen Poe

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