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Edder
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0 posted 2003-08-09 01:58 PM


One stone
tossed
ripples an ocean
and drowns--
never reaching
the depth
I fell into you.



© Copyright 2003 Edder - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-08-09 02:33 PM


b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l
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2 posted 2003-08-09 04:00 PM


Edder, this is beautiful....
so much in so few!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-08-09 04:03 PM


...WOW...

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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displaced
4 posted 2003-08-09 05:07 PM


wow

awesome

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5 posted 2003-08-09 05:15 PM




(smiles) Oh Edder, this is just beautifully romantic, sweet friend, I missed reading your poetry being on vacation and being busy with my music but I'm so happy to read you again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Edder
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6 posted 2003-08-09 11:46 PM


Thank you all for reading, having a hard time finding inspiration right now, hoping that will change soon.
KoKo
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7 posted 2003-08-15 06:31 PM


-hugs- You'll find it again, yup. Don't worry. "It'll come when it's meant to..." Sound familiar?

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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8 posted 2003-08-15 08:17 PM


You make me smile, Ed.

I hardly call this uninspired.

Hugs you, I love the way you think...

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9 posted 2004-03-05 01:30 AM


WOW
WOW
WOW

muted
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10 posted 2004-03-05 01:32 AM


oops, manage to double the response...
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